I actually really like this piece. While I do agree with everything already said in a different review, I tend to review on a different score card. I think everyone is on their own level and it takes practice and patience to improve. I am excited to see how far you develop. You got this! I can’t say I am a great artist myself. I just started using digital medium myself (being a traditional artist for years). But I do know a thing or too about progression. Do it to it!